This is the presentation I presented them with.
The feedback I received was quite eye-opening. Although I was quite disheartened at first, I am thankful i received this feedback as I will be able to build on this and improve my final major project. There were a lot of things I hadn't considered which Russell and Sebastien brought to my attention.
Feedback:
- The purpose of my website is not clear enough. Its unclear who the website is for and what its intention is. Based on heir feedback, I can look at my progress so far and agree that the purpose is quite vague and not clear enough.
- Its possible there isn't much demand for the website at all. Would Make-up artists realistically see a need to visit it? When I think about this possibility it does make sense that make up artists wouldn't necessarily see the need for it. i need to think about how to adapt the website so that it meets more of a demand in the market.
- The USP isn't clear enough. What makes my website different to any other beauty site? I can see what Sebastien and Russell mean by this, based on what I've shown them so far my website currently looks very stereotypical and not particularly inventive or innovative - nothing so far is setting me apart from any other beauty website.
Overall the feedback I received highlighted the importance and urgency for me to redefine my USP and to find something that made me passionate about creating the outcome. Sebastien commented that he didn't feel I was very enthusiastic about the project and I would agree that I am am still having trouble with motivation and ambition. I got a bit emotional wheN i received this feedback. It has occurred to me that I have been burying my hand in the sand and ignoring my negative feelings towards my work and motivation.
Going forward...
- I urgently need to redefine my USP and project focus
- Make the intention/purpose of my website clearer to the audience
♯Initiative & Independent Learning
♯Devise Innovative and Appropriate Solutions to a problem or brief
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